Candycorn!

I'm never good at giving helpful advice, but I will give it a try. If this is the Sergal Race by Trancy Mick, there's just a few anatomy points to focus on. (please note I'm not an expert on the race in any way. I am just going by what I see. ) The head seems to be just one straight slope.  Instead of more canine, try going more shark-esq, with a slight dip inward around the mouth area. The ears seem more narrow, long, and slightly pointed, too. As far as everything else. I love your coloring job, that's lovely, as is the character itself. Your lines are done well, they flow much better than mine do! If this was a canine I would definitely say great job! With just a few tweeks this could take on more of the sergal appearance, though! Definitely good for a first go at sergals! <3